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Wednesday, 12 April 2017

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Do you have a special place in your community? Well I do my special place it’s my school, my school is special to me because that's where I go every day.


I love my school, my one is one of the best schools that’s why it's special to me.
School is just like my home like how you have family at home, I also have family at school everyone that’s why school is special.
Another reason school is a special place because I get to learn and have fun each day.I love it because you get to make new friends and show them how it works in your school.School is a special place in my community but I don’t know about you?


I love school even if I go to another school.School is always going to be a special place in my community because everybody care’s,love,shares and is always being kind to each other.I don’t know about you, do you have a special place in your community???





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Do you have a special place in your community? Well I do my special place it’s my school, my school is special to me because that's where I go every day.


I love my school, my school is one of the best schools that’s why it's special to me.
School is just like my home like how you have family at home, I also have family at school and that is  everyone that’s why school is special.
Another reason school is a special place because I get to learn and have fun each day.I love it because you get to make new friends and show them how it works in your school.School is a special place in my community but I don’t know about you?


I love school even if I go to another school.School is always going to be a special place in my community because everybody care’s,love,shares and is always being kind to each other.I don’t know about you, do you have a special place in your community???





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