So for this weeks work we had to select a well known fairy tale and change it up a bit and add revolting rhymes like Roald Dahl’s in his stories. I have picked snow white and I have changed it a bit, it was a fun task and I hope you enjoy.
Snow white
Once upon a time there lived a royal family who lived in a beautiful palace. One night the queen gave birth to a beautiful baby girl that was soon to be called snow white because she was as white as snow .
Snow white grew up to be a beautiful and humble girl . As she grew up she had a older sister that would always be jealous of her beauty and always knew that snow white was the favourite child and always got everything.
As the older sister had enough of seeing snow whites beauty and fame she wanted to do something bad to her because before snow white was born she had all the attention and beauty but that didn’t last that long until snow white came along.
Snow white always had a kind heart and cared for her family and her people. But as she didn’t know she had a sister that hated her and tried anything to her feel bad.There mother, the kind hearted queen became very sick and soon passed away. The girls were still very young, years went by very fast and there father was getting old and weak so he remarried again. The new queen was very pretty but had a bad heart and only cared about herself and that she would always be the prettiest in the kingdom.
Also the queen had enough of seeing snow white always being the prettiest in the kingdom. The queen hated her to the point she wanted to kill snow white, but she didn’t know how too. One day as snow whites older sister walked passed the queen’s room she heard the queen talking to the night and saying kill snow white.
The sister was shocked that the queen was bad and hated snow white. She stayed there for a bit and listened for a while. Then the night opened the door and the older sister fell inside the room, the queen said oh dear we were just talking about your sister snow white how wonderful she is. But then the sister said no I heard everything that you have said, but I won’t tell anyone cause I also want to kill snow white myself, the evil queen was shocked too.
They worked on a plan to kill snow white and the best way they could was to poison her food. So they told and forced the poor, innocent chef to do what they have commanded to poison snow whites food so he did. At the dinner time as they were eating they waited for snow white to pass out but nothing was happening. But little as they didn’t know the evil sister and queen was getting poisoned.
The foolish queen and sister was soon to become very ill and was soon to be gone. Snow white and her family didn’t know why they became very ill and they still don’t know who poisoned them after all. Years went by and the king has passed away and snow white has all the responsibility of the kingdom. She also married a handsome prince and has beautiful children. They lived happily ever after…….The End
This blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, through to Tamaki College.
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Sunday, 16 September 2018
Friday, 31 August 2018
Pourquoi tales
This is my writing that I have wrote it is my made up story about how the elephant got it's trunk. It was a bit of a challenging task but I did it. It is a pourquoi tale an I hope you like it.
How The Elephant Got It’s Trunk
On one fine day in beautiful jungle there was this one big of a animal who had humongous and enormous, ear’s, 4 legs and body. It was called an elephant, but the one thing is that the elephant struggled to eat, smell, touch and breath cause he had an tiny nose. The jungle thought that elephant is so lucky to be humongous and to be one of the biggest animals in the jungle. But as they didn’t know the elephant wasn’t happy for what he was, he just wanted to be as the same as the rest of the animals in the jungle to smell, eat, touch and breathe properly.
But that wasn’t possible for him. He went up to the giraffe and asked how did your neck grow that long but giraffe just ignored him and carried on. Then he went up to the frog and asked how does your tongue go so long, but the frog just bounced away. The elephant wondered and wondered, hoping for something to happen to him to help him one day.
Later on the day the elephant decided to go for a walk as he was walking a snake bit his nose, the elephant tried as hard as he could to pull away but the snake just kept his long body wrapped around the branch as he kept hold of the poor elephant’s nose. The elephant tried to speak but started to lose his breath and as more as he tried to pull the longer his nose stretched. He could just say one last word out loud and he shouted out loud HELP.
Lucky near by him was giraffe who was picking apples from the high tree’s. Giraffe ran to see what was going on when he saw elephant trying to escaped from the foolish and careless snake. Giraffe wrapped his long neck around elephant and pulled. The Snake ran off and as soon as the elephant was released he could breathe like never before. He was shocked that he had a long nose that was soon to be called a trunk.
The elephant was joyful and glad he could do a lot of things with his trunk as he couldn't do before. The Elephant is very happy for who he is, and is thankful that snake and the giraffe has helped him out, even though the Snake was very foolish.
But that wasn’t possible for him. He went up to the giraffe and asked how did your neck grow that long but giraffe just ignored him and carried on. Then he went up to the frog and asked how does your tongue go so long, but the frog just bounced away. The elephant wondered and wondered, hoping for something to happen to him to help him one day.
Later on the day the elephant decided to go for a walk as he was walking a snake bit his nose, the elephant tried as hard as he could to pull away but the snake just kept his long body wrapped around the branch as he kept hold of the poor elephant’s nose. The elephant tried to speak but started to lose his breath and as more as he tried to pull the longer his nose stretched. He could just say one last word out loud and he shouted out loud HELP.
Lucky near by him was giraffe who was picking apples from the high tree’s. Giraffe ran to see what was going on when he saw elephant trying to escaped from the foolish and careless snake. Giraffe wrapped his long neck around elephant and pulled. The Snake ran off and as soon as the elephant was released he could breathe like never before. He was shocked that he had a long nose that was soon to be called a trunk.
The elephant was joyful and glad he could do a lot of things with his trunk as he couldn't do before. The Elephant is very happy for who he is, and is thankful that snake and the giraffe has helped him out, even though the Snake was very foolish.
Friday, 3 August 2018
Explanation template: Physical activity
What is physical activity? Physical activity is know as exercise and fitness. But what does physical activity do to you and help you with?
One benefit of physical activity is that it can help you with is your health. It can reduce your risk from getting diseases such as chronic disease and helps prevent cancer. Also eating healthy is another way to keep you from getting diseases.
Another benefit physical activity does is help your brain. Did you know that when you exercise you increase your heart rate and which pumps more oxygen to the brain. Aerobic exercise can also help your brain. It also does more things than that, you can also have good memory function and information processing.
Physical activity also strengthens the heart. Your heart is like a muscle it gets better and stronger while you exercise. Also working on the heart muscle can help prevent heart diseases. Another thing it does to your heart is to pump blood to your lungs and throughout your body.
So there we have it benefits of physical activity. So now you know that physical activity can help you with health, body and more.
One benefit of physical activity is that it can help you with is your health. It can reduce your risk from getting diseases such as chronic disease and helps prevent cancer. Also eating healthy is another way to keep you from getting diseases.
Another benefit physical activity does is help your brain. Did you know that when you exercise you increase your heart rate and which pumps more oxygen to the brain. Aerobic exercise can also help your brain. It also does more things than that, you can also have good memory function and information processing.
Physical activity also strengthens the heart. Your heart is like a muscle it gets better and stronger while you exercise. Also working on the heart muscle can help prevent heart diseases. Another thing it does to your heart is to pump blood to your lungs and throughout your body.
So there we have it benefits of physical activity. So now you know that physical activity can help you with health, body and more.
Monday, 14 August 2017
Speech and Speech reflection.
This is my speech reflection that I have done.It is about me talking about my speech that I gave to my class and what I should do better and what I felt do well.I hope you enjoy.
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